http://mkimme2.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Mon, 24 Nov 2008 21:08:45 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://mkimme2.wordpress.com/essay-4/#comment-13 mkimme2 Mon, 24 Nov 2008 21:08:45 +0000 http://mkimme2.wordpress.com/essay-4/#comment-13 I think I did better on explaining quotes and not using the famous "this quote means". I think I need to work on forming a better intro and conclusion. I think they are getting better, but I feel like I need to end with something a little more catchy. I also need to work on making my essay flow better. When I read it through, I do not know whether to move something up or down, or delete it, but I know some of it did not flow correctly. I think I did better on explaining quotes and not using the famous “this quote means”. I think I need to work on forming a better intro and conclusion. I think they are getting better, but I feel like I need to end with something a little more catchy. I also need to work on making my essay flow better. When I read it through, I do not know whether to move something up or down, or delete it, but I know some of it did not flow correctly.

]]> http://mkimme2.wordpress.com/2008/08/29/glog-on-gutenberg-1/#comment-2 doctorshelley Sat, 30 Aug 2008 14:37:22 +0000 http://mkimme2.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-2 lots of good questions--continue to use your glog for that as well as to bring these kinds of questions into class discussion. i wonder about the question of access you raise. does greater access to a variety of books and texts change what reading means for you? for birkerts? lots of good questions–continue to use your glog for that as well as to bring these kinds of questions into class discussion. i wonder about the question of access you raise. does greater access to a variety of books and texts change what reading means for you? for birkerts?

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